Tuesday, November 24, 2009
argument topic
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
template c
- reliable phone
- complete entertainment
- music
- internet
- applications
The iphone is a phone that anyone can use and be satisfied with.
Criteria
There are a few things that are important to know about the iphone when purchasing it. A main reason people purchase the iphone is the services available. The iphone provides a phone service, and internet service, and an iTunes service. These three services make it a full multimedia device. The phone service uses a reliable AT&T network. It can get internet just about anywhere. The iTunes service allows people to download music at any time.
The iphone also offers other forms of entertainment with the use of applications. These applications can either be purchases or downloaded for free depending on what they are. The applications range from many different things, such as games to tools. One can download an application for just about any need necessary.
Another important thing when purchasing the iphone is the price itself. The price of the phone has dropped down a lot from its original price. The service however is $30 more per month than a standard cell phone service. Also, many applications cost money. Some range from $1 up to about $7 or $8.
The main thing to look at when purchasing the iphone is the reliability. AT&T is a reliable network with coverage just about anywhere. It all depends on where you will be using your iphone.
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
template B
Thursday, November 5, 2009
iphone review template A
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
commentary thesis
commentary outline
o Introduce the trend
§ The trend is that it is very hard for students to find a parking spot on campus
§ Difficult for students to find parking because there are not enough spaces for all of the students
· Second
o Explain why parking is so bad on campus
§ Not enough spaces in lots
§ Not enough lots
· Constructing more buildings
o Building over existing parking lots
· Third
o Introduce another point of view on the subject
§ Give the thoughts of a classmate on parking
· Ask questions to get his point of view
o How do you know what you know?
o Who are you to the subject?
o How is the even connected to other events?
o What if things were different?
o How is this important?
o Why is parking so bad?
o What causes it to be so bad?
o How can parking be improved on campus?
o How does parking on campus compare to the surrounding area?
o What are some alternatives to parking?
· Fourth
o Explain ways to help improve the situation
§ What can we do to solve the parking problem
· More garages
· More lots
· Give passes to students who really need it
· Fifth
o Effects of students
§ What are the effects on the students
· Late to class
· Leave for campus early
o Less sleep
o Less study time
· Sixth
o Alternatives
§ What else can students do instead of drive to campus
· Park and ride
· Car pool
· Public transportation
· Shuttle