Tuesday, November 24, 2009

argument topic

The topic for my paper will be about steroids in baseball. Should steroids be allowed in major league baseball?

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

template c

iphone
  • reliable phone
  • complete entertainment
  • music
  • internet
  • applications

The iphone is a phone that anyone can use and be satisfied with.

Criteria

There are a few things that are important to know about the iphone when purchasing it. A main reason people purchase the iphone is the services available. The iphone provides a phone service, and internet service, and an iTunes service. These three services make it a full multimedia device. The phone service uses a reliable AT&T network. It can get internet just about anywhere. The iTunes service allows people to download music at any time.

The iphone also offers other forms of entertainment with the use of applications. These applications can either be purchases or downloaded for free depending on what they are. The applications range from many different things, such as games to tools. One can download an application for just about any need necessary.

Another important thing when purchasing the iphone is the price itself. The price of the phone has dropped down a lot from its original price. The service however is $30 more per month than a standard cell phone service. Also, many applications cost money. Some range from $1 up to about $7 or $8.

The main thing to look at when purchasing the iphone is the reliability. AT&T is a reliable network with coverage just about anywhere. It all depends on where you will be using your iphone.

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

template B

There are a few things about the iphone that are important when purchasing it. A main reason people purchase the iphone is the services it provides. The iphone offers a phone service, an internet service, and an iTunes service. These three services make it a full multimedia device. The phone service is one of the most reliable with AT&T. The internet service is available just about anywhere. The iTunes service allows people to purchase music where ever they are.
The iphone also offers more forms entertainment with the many applications. The applications can either be purchased or downloaded for free depending on what they are. The applications range from many things such as games, tools, books, etc. One can download an application for just about anything they want.

Another thing to keep in mind when purchasing the iphone is the actual price itself. The iphone price has dropped quite a bit from its original price, but is still rather expensive. The main thing that separates the iphone from other phones is the service itself. The iphone service is $30 more expensive than a normal cell phone service. Also, many applications cost money. Some can range from $1 up to $7 or $8.
The main thing to think about when purchasing the iphone is reliability. AT&T is a reliable service that gets coverage just about anywhere. According to a competitor, it gets less than half the coverage. It all depends on where you will be using it.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

iphone review template A

The audience for the iphone would be anyone from a young teenager to someone that is much older. The iphone is simple enough for anyone and everyone to use. People who use this product are looking for something much more than just a cell phone, but a complete multimedia entertainment device. Also, it is a good tool to use for business purposes.
Important features that these people need are reliability, internet, and other forms of tools and games. The iphone is important to people because they use it for just about anything and everything. Some people just use it as a means of entertainment by listening to music, texting, or playing games they have downloaded. On the other hand, a lot of people use the iphone to manage their businesses and do work. These people might use this product to check emails, send reports, or even as a word processor to write those reports. But the one thing that these people value most about the iphone is the wireless internet connection they can get anywhere. Without the use of the internet, the iphone would be just another cell phone with a touch screen.
Friends of the iphone users might also be interested in getting their own iphone after using it. The iphone is being used all over by many different people and it might benefit friends to get one as well. It would hurt not to know that the iphone is widely used by everyone and is becoming one of the most popular phones and multimedia devices available. People need to keep up with the new technology and the iphone updates developed by Apple. This phone is being updated constantly, and to keep it working well needs to have these updates installed.
Benefits of the iphone are vast. The iphone can be beneficial for many things. It can do things like help lost people with the GPS or map application. Also, it can check emails for people that need to stay in touch with their company or their boss. The iphone is also beneficial to people who suffer from boredom. It plays music, movies, and has many different applications and games that can be downloaded. But, the most direct benefit is that it does its first job. It is a cell phone. The iphone is a reliable cell phone complete with picture I.D. and everything. It helps people stay connected either by phone call, text message, or email. But, people do need to know that the iphone does come with a price, literally. It is more expensive than any other phone and the plan for the iphone is expensive as well. I recommend that anyone planning on purchasing this product make sure they can afford it first.

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

review topic

I will write my review on the iphone.

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

commentary thesis

Since I have been on campus at UCF I have noticed that the parking situaion isn't very good. I have noticed so far that there are many students that park on campus, and not enough spaces to park. There are a lot of garages and lots on campus, yet people still have trouble finding places to park because of so many students choosing to drive to school. This is important because this decides the students’ day. If a student has trouble finding a place to park, they could be late to class; which is never good.

commentary outline

· First paragraph
o Introduce the trend
§ The trend is that it is very hard for students to find a parking spot on campus
§ Difficult for students to find parking because there are not enough spaces for all of the students
· Second
o Explain why parking is so bad on campus
§ Not enough spaces in lots
§ Not enough lots
· Constructing more buildings
o Building over existing parking lots
· Third
o Introduce another point of view on the subject
§ Give the thoughts of a classmate on parking
· Ask questions to get his point of view
o How do you know what you know?
o Who are you to the subject?
o How is the even connected to other events?
o What if things were different?
o How is this important?
o Why is parking so bad?
o What causes it to be so bad?
o How can parking be improved on campus?
o How does parking on campus compare to the surrounding area?
o What are some alternatives to parking?
· Fourth
o Explain ways to help improve the situation
§ What can we do to solve the parking problem
· More garages
· More lots
· Give passes to students who really need it
· Fifth
o Effects of students
§ What are the effects on the students
· Late to class
· Leave for campus early
o Less sleep
o Less study time
· Sixth
o Alternatives
§ What else can students do instead of drive to campus
· Park and ride
· Car pool
· Public transportation
· Shuttle